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<div class="brand"><span class="spark">✎</span>Essay Helper</div>
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<div class="doc">Executive Summary</div>
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<span class="pill"><span class="dot"></span>Shipped · v1.4</span>
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<a class="pill pdflink" href="https://zoe-pitches.mosaic.site/essay-helper/Essay-Helper-Executive-Summary.pdf">PDF ↓</a>
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<p class="thesis">Give every student honest writing feedback — <span class="em">at the scale of AI.</span></p>
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<p class="deck">Essay Helper is a Microsoft 365 Word add-in that reviews a student’s draft and coaches their citations from inside the document — and it is architecturally incapable of inventing a source. It coaches instead of ghost-writing, meets students where they already write, and it’s built, tested, and shipped today.</p>
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<div class="lab g">The problem</div>
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<h3>Feedback doesn’t scale; bad AI does</h3>
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<p>One teacher can’t give thirty students timely feedback on argument and evidence. Generic AI fills the gap — but it fabricates citations (misconduct) or just writes the essay (learning lost).</p>
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<div class="lab">The solution</div>
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<h3>A coach that can’t make things up</h3>
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<p>It flags weak arguments and unsupported claims as comments anchored to the sentence, and coaches in six stances — from Socratic questions to direct, provenance-tagged answers.</p>
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<div class="lab">Why it wins</div>
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<h3>Trust, enforced in code</h3>
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<p>A validation layer drops any citation that doesn’t point to a source the student supplied — so the no-fabrication promise holds even if the model misbehaves. Institutions can approve it <em>because</em> of how it’s built.</p>
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<div><div class="k tnum">0</div><div class="m">Sources ever invented</div></div>
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<div><div class="k g tnum">155</div><div class="m">Automated tests green</div></div>
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<div><div class="k tnum">6</div><div class="m">Coaching modes</div></div>
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<div><div class="k g tnum">5</div><div class="m">Assignment types</div></div>
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<div class="lab">Business model</div>
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<span class="hi">Free</span> for students → <span class="hi">institutional site license</span><br>
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<span class="hg">1</span> institution = <span class="hg">many seats</span> + analytics<br>
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→ sold on the one thing they can’t buy elsewhere
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<div class="big">A writing AI they can vouch for.</div>
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<p style="color:var(--muted); font-size:12.5px; margin-top:7px">Land free with students; expand to per-seat/per-FTE licenses with admin controls & teacher analytics. <span style="color:var(--faint)">Figures illustrative.</span></p>
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<div class="lab">Where we are</div>
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<div class="srow"><span class="ic ok">✓</span> Shipped to main & pushed <span class="g2">DONE</span></div>
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<div class="srow"><span class="ic ok">✓</span> 155 automated tests green <span class="g2">DONE</span></div>
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<div class="srow"><span class="ic ok">✓</span> Live model-safety evals passing <span class="g2">DONE</span></div>
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<div class="srow"><span class="ic ok">✓</span> No-fabrication validator (not a prompt) <span class="g2">DONE</span></div>
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<div class="srow"><span class="ic gate">!</span> First classroom pilot <span class="g2">NEXT</span></div>
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<div class="lab">The ask</div>
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<p><b>A green light to run a pilot with 2–3 design-partner classes this term</b>, a short runway to a Google Docs client + teacher-facing analytics, and support to court the first institutional buyer. The build risk is behind us — this is now about putting a finished, safe product in front of students and turning real classroom use into the sales story.</p>
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<span>Essay Helper · Executive Summary · Confidential</span>
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<span>Full plan: <a href="https://zoe-pitches.mosaic.site/essay-helper/">zoe-pitches.mosaic.site/essay-helper</a></span>
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